MLP fanfic page 1

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page 1: you are here
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this is the intro for the fanfic my friend and I are making
story:
Twilight trotted happily along side her mentor, princess Celestia.
She smiled nervously. Being a princess... was she ready for the task? Her friends left a few moments ago when Celestia sent them away. Celetia had told her that she needed to begin her training. Twilight looked down at the red carpet, deep in thought. Her mane bathed in the warmth of the faint sunlight as the sun peeked through the colourful glass windows. A unnatural gust of wind blew by and twilight stiffened. Suddenly a large clouds layered over the beaming sun and the royal entrance dimmed. Suddenly twilight realized that celestia's horn was glowing red. she was doing a spell. what was it? the glow was freakishly strange and sent a shiver down twilight's spine. Unable to contain her curiousity, Twilight halted in her tracks and faced Celestia.
"your highness, what are you-"

Celestia turned around and her eyes flared red and the light on her horn began to turn into a glare. Celestia smiled and she looked at Twilight. "
IT is time to begin your training." she whispered.
Twilight's eyes widened as she realized Celestia's smile was unnatural and filled with a ill intent. Very slowly she backed away. Celestia advanced and her face darkened.
"my most loyal student, it is time."
Twilight began to run faster something about her voice frightened her. Fleeing faster she watched as the doors slammed shut. She crashed into the wall.
Twilight curled into the corner and stared at Celestia's blank eyes.
Something was wrong.
end of part 1

whoo... Celestia is evilll in this XD I just finished reading this part
what are your thoughts? XD my friend wrote this in 1 hour eek she is fast

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